My ID Theft Advert (Ruff Edited)

This was my first ruff edited for my ID Theft advert. After editing it and looking back at it, I found some problems with the storyline that I needed to make. The mistake that I made with it was that I didn't create any mystery around the advert and just gave the idea away to audiences as soon as the advert started. So to do that I had to reshot the advert with a different storyboard and few new actors. Also I found that I didn't have many different shot types or voice over or a pack shot, so I had to work on those areas with my new advert.